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Post by Superevil225 Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:48 pm

For a project for school I have to make a comic book and I had this really neat idea for the comic, but the conflict is non existent.

So I have this idea that there are these dolls (far in the future) and they have the perfect body, and all someone has to do is paint these blank dolls to look like a person, and they have a perfect model, so they don't need to use photoshop. These dolls are mechanical, and have the mind (A.I.) of a 5 year old, so that they are able to move like a person and act like a person in model situations so the photographer or camera operator only has to tell them what to do, and they'll do it. The only glitch in the dolls is that they are like a 5 year old, so they'll throw tantrums and knock things over, and not understand that it's bad. sooo I don't have a conflict, which I need, and I also need a name for these dolls.

Thanks in advance!
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Post by Antari Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:37 am

I dare you to call them "Little Sisters" Very Happy

As for the conflict, they throw tantrums, right? Just make the dolls and the people fight a lot Smile
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Post by xdenslatx Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:29 pm

how about senkai's?

or Tsubasas?

(yes im trying my best to influence some anime aspect into your story.)
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Post by Superevil225 Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:54 pm

Hmmmm It's set in America, so I don't think the asian style names will work. I was thinking Pretty Girls, or maybe Lucys. What do you all think of those?
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Post by xdenslatx Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:55 pm

to obvious...
hmmm how about just Dollface?
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Post by Wert Ac Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:15 pm

....Pikmin? :3
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Post by Antari Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:53 pm

Little Sisters!

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Post by Superevil225 Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:03 pm

Pikmin is trade marketed and I will not use little sister! It's already taken!
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Post by Antari Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:37 pm

Really?

.... Why not "Eleanor's"?

Wait, Eleanor killed me......
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Post by Mr Pie 5 Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:04 pm

they run off and somebody finds them and r4pes their perfect bodies

oh wait, did you say School project? nvm
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Post by Sajextryus Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:48 pm

Is a murder an acceptable topic? If so, I've got a good idea.
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Post by Sajextryus Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:05 pm

Sajextryus wrote:Is a murder an acceptable topic? If so, I've got a good idea.
Anyone care to hear? At all?
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Post by Mr Pie 5 Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:11 pm

oh you were asking us?

well in that case, by all means go, ahead
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Post by Sajextryus Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:16 pm

One of the dolls kill someone while having a tempur tantrum. They are locked up in a lab to be deactivated after people had fear of more murders. While they are in there, they find out a horrifying secret: The doll-robot-thing's AI requires specific parts of the human brain. The company building them is kidnapping children and murdering them for their own experiments. The dolls now have to find a way out and reveal the horrifying truth to the public, but it won't be easy while locked up in high security and feared by the public.
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Post by Mr Pie 5 Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:27 pm

thats good
but I dont know if it is school apropriate
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Post by Superevil225 Tue Feb 23, 2010 5:06 pm

My idea was there's this mechanic, and he's hired to fix the tantrum problems. He falls in love with one of the dolls, but his boss falls in love with him. (lol love triangle) Then the doll freaks out and attempts to kill said mechanic. The mechanic then falls for his boss, blah blah blah. The dolls continue their tantrums, and a few of the night security and a few mechanic have ben killed. THEN, doll freaks out one final time, this time because mr. mechanic isn't giving her attention. Mr. Mechanic smashes in the robot's head, and then he realizes he loved the robot. XD I love sick love stories.
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